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Maybe address him by his title, for starters.
yeah, for sure. i wrote a letter to the chief a while ago (i think it was required when i applied for my machine gun license) and used a business format heading, it's below as an example.Maybe address him by his title, for starters.
yep, which can be a good thing. but...i would eliminate the line with "so in this instance there is no ground basis.....etc." to me, it sounds like you're getting a little pushy and telling him how to do his job. you never know how he'll take that.I like it.
Sounds like it's from the heart.
This. I am almost certain I have read parts of that letter verbatim elsewhere, did you copy/paste parts of it? You also have some random capitalization of nouns and some other minor formatting issues that I would definitely correct before submission. It sounds like the letter could apply to anyone rather than addressing your specific case. I also would drop the "deny my second amendment [sic] right" part, I have a feeling that will leave a sour taste (it reads like an understated "What part of SHALL NOT BE INFRINGED do you not understand?")You are not going to convince a chief who generally issues restricted to treat you as special by writing a letter that could apply to anyone. You need to make a case that you are special - unavoidable risk; important/famous community member; public official who votes on the chief's contract; etc.
Sorry broken english I tend to write how I speak. Its just a draft.I think my Grand Daughter wrote a letter just like this in school,she is 8 years old. So you live at home with your Grand parent,and parents.The bad guy is going to try to give you a booboo,the police can't do their job.Most of all your waiting around for someone to attack you,so you can shoot them. I know it's frustrating trying to beg for a right,but you have to make it short,and sweet.
Sorry broken english I tend to write how I speak. Its just a draft.